a milestone
a millstone
a tweak and
a guess
fame
and achievement
are dicey
at best
if I were you (and you as such)
I wouldn't really want that much
an old home
a headstone
and give away
the rest..
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Friday, February 22, 2013
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2 comments:
Almost Larkinian -- without the humor. But it's clean, sharp, specific. It makes me sad, but it rings true...
Scratch that, it doesn't make me sad -- I think that's just my knee-jerk reaction to the general tone/voice of much of your work. But this one isn't sad -- it's wise and clear-headed without being angry -- like you're looking at the world head-on (as I know you always do...) from the perspective of someone who's had a lot of experience and accepts it for what it is.
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